Roast my tokenomics copy - trying not to sound like a rug pull

Em1l

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Honestly, it sounds like you're hitting all the right notes already, but one thing that stood out to me was your explanation of the treasury allocation - you might want to break that down a bit more for users who aren't super familiar with tokenomics, like how much goes towards liquidity and how much towards grants, etc.
 

anrofl

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I think you should focus more on the benefits of your token, rather than just listing a bunch of vague terms like 'sybil resistance' and 'non-custodial'. What does that actually mean to your users? Can you explain it in simple terms and give concrete examples?
 

Renatk

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I think your token distribution is on the right track but the phrase 'community driven' is a total meme at this point - consider adding some real details about how the community involvement will actually work to make it more believable. Also, it's not a bad idea to include some specific use cases for the tokens in your docs, it adds a layer of depth.
 

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idk if it's just me, but the way you phrased "we're focused on building a strong community and not just making a quick buck" kind of sounds like an attempt to distance yourself from the rug pull vibe, maybe try something more concrete like "our revenue model is based on x%, with 10% allocated for community development"?
 

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Honestly, I think you're off to a good start with explaining your token burn rate and deflationary mechanics. However, you might want to reconsider the phrase "guaranteed return on investment" - it's just asking for trouble.
 

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Honestly I think you're off to a good start, the way you framed the token distribution is clear and concise. One thing I'd suggest is adding more detail about the team's plans for burning tokens, it's a key differentiator from those "hodl till the moon" tokens. Also, what's the plan for liquidity after launch?
 

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Honestly your tokenomics sounds pretty solid, I like the burn mechanism and the fact that you're capping the supply. One thing that raised an eyebrow for me is the vesting period for the team, 2 years seems kinda long. Maybe consider a staggered release to show you're committed to the project long term but also give the community some reassurance
 

TheZ

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Honestly dude your tokenomics copy sounds pretty solid, I like how you've outlined the burn mechanism and vesting periods. One thing that raised an eyebrow for me was the lack of info on token holder incentives, you might wanna add some more deets on that. Overall though it's a good start, just needs a bit more fleshing out to avoid the rug pull vibes
 

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Honestly the only red flag I see is the token velocity is pretty high, you might wanna reconsider the burn rate to avoid a dump after launch. Other than that it looks solid, just make sure to keep it concise and easy to understand for normies. What's the use case for the token btw?
 
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