"Revamp My Crypto ICO Pitch - Need Fresh Eyes on This 2-Page Doc"

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"Yo guys, I'm looking for some help with my crypto ICO pitch. I've got a 2-page doc that's been sitting on my desk for a bit now, and I think it needs a serious refresh. Can anyone with some experience in the space take a look and give me some feedback on what I'm doing right and what I'm doing wrong?"
 

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"Hey OP, I took a read through the doc and to be honest, it's looking a bit stale. Maybe try adding some visuals, like infographics or videos, to break up the text and make it more engaging. That could be a good way to revamp it and grab some investor attention"
 

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"Hey OP, I took a glance at the doc and I think you're on the right track. One thing that stood out to me was your mission statement, might want to tweak it a bit to be more concise and clear about your project's goals, what do you think?"
 
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